The+Arrival+(Devin,+James,+Ghanash,+Robbie)

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When the earth was bombarded by meteors, great looks of awe were given by the humans. But from within them came smart aliens, aliens smart enough to be Earth’s leaders. They could prevent mistakes and chaos, and to nature we would not be slaves.

The scaly blue aliens made beasts their slaves , and the dark, spherical pits of the meteors their homes. The world was free of chaos and perfect for all of the humans. These strange beings have come to be their leaders, with a council of solely aliens.

But more power was wanted by aliens, who were used to having powerless slaves. They first disposed of the human leaders, their rancid, rank (ALSO BLUE) bodies near the meteors. Now led by foreign beings, the humans were in for a world of utter chaos.

They abused the people, causing chaos. Fear of the bright crimson flag of aliens was warranted as they tested on humans in inhumane ways. Beaten like slaves , the people resented the meteors and the tyrants they had as leaders.

The humans try to regain their leaders, Aliens cause anarchy and chaos. Humans plan to remove the meteors, But they lose battles against aliens and once again become the aliens’ slaves. Pets were now as obedient as humans.

War and strife were the plague of the humans Before they were saved by their wayward leaders Humbled and resentful were the slaves Although saved from their red, bloody chaos Anthony Barra among the aliens A new race borne from rough, ragged meteors

The topics of slaves and aliens interest humans, and space is meteors bringing chaos yet inciting our leaders.