The+Cycle+of+Pain

By Zach Kalik

A village in ashes, lonesome and bare. Dark clouds shroud place, a gloomy troposphere. Serrated stench of smoke fills up the air. Bombs, axes, swords, lances, the blood villagers shared.

rivaling kingdom caused this ruination thanks to endless war since the start of time. Endless cycle of pain, till damnation. Whoever remains must commit same crime.

Is there a path that would stop this long fight. Well, if people were willing to amend, A step towards peace gained, a step towards the light.
 * But wait, could there possibly be an end. **

Simple to use anger when in deep strife, But road of forgiveness brings peace in life.


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